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Common Mistakes that Students Make

Dr. Adam Winsler, Associate Professor of Psychology, George Mason University

  • "One common grammatical error that I encounter in students' papers is Effect versus Affect."
  • "Another common grammatical error in student's papers is the dangling modifier. This is when they start a sentence like, "thinking about how researchers have pursued this…" Then they do not have "I," or any other active subject as the next word in the next clause, completing the dependent clause with which they started the sentence. You have to have an active subject there. People have the bad idea that their writing has to be in non-active voice. "I" is okay to use and first person is okay. It is better to be in active voice than in passive voice."
  • "Another problem that I find students have is NOT using parallelism in lists. If you are making a list in a sentence, you must have the form of speech and the tense the same in all items in that list. For example, "these researchers studied three things; how kids think about this at this age, how people do this, and child molestation." is wrong. That third term in the list of three is not in the same form as the first two. Has to be "how" something… The noun or verb form that you are using has to be in the same form in lists of things."
  • "I find that many times students think they have to write fancily. What that means is that they are using poor words and they are trying to make it more fancy than it needs to be. What is much better is clear writing that your grandmother can understand. People tend to make sentences more complex than they need to be."
  • "Students sometimes try to get away with using only Internet searches for their sources. You cannot do this. You need to use other resources than the Internet such as lit searches and other resources in the library to access the papers published in scholarly journals on your topic."

Dr. Lynn McFarland, Assistant Professor of Psychology, George Mason University

  • "The most frequent mistake that I encounter in students' papers is that they don't answer the question and they don't deal with the content. They spit out everything they know and they don't cover what the question asked. The answer to the question is not in the textbook."

Advice for Student Writers

Dr. Adam Winsler, Associate Professor of Psychology, George Mason University

  • "Read your paper out loud to yourself before you turn it in. This provides an extra level of self-monitoring."
  • "A tip that I frequently give to students is to try free writing. I tell them to shut off the monitor on their computer (leave the computer on) and just type, don't worry about spelling and editing."
  • "Using a word processor on a computer changes the entire cognitive process of writing. I encourage students to do word processing on the computer."

Dr. Lynn McFarland, Assistant Professor of Psychology George Mason University

  • “My advice to students is to proofread their papers. They should read their paper several times, especially for the big assignments. They need to make sure it is clear and that they have expressed everything well. The true test of clarity in a paper is if someone outside of psychology can understand the study. So, I recommend that students give their papers to someone (e.g., a friend or relative) who is not a psychology major. If this individual understands what the student is trying to convey, it is likely the paper is well written.”

General Comments on Students' Writing

Dr. Adam Winsler, Associate Professor of Psychology, George Mason University

  • "If you are not writing well, you are not thinking well."


  • "I grade papers on the same dimensions that are used in the real world to evaluate competence in any discipline."

Dr. Lynn McFarland, Assistant Professor of Psychology George Mason University

  • "The most important thing that I look for in a student's paper is clarity."